Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In school students learn a lot of new things which can help them in their future however there has is a debate on what is the right time to teach certain topics to them. As per the statement of some people think teaching languages other than native language is important in primary school instead of secondary. I agree with the statement as there are many advantages of teaching foreign language in primary school than a disadvantage. I would like to elaborate on my stance in the essay further.
Firstly, in primary school children are in the age where they are required to learning new things and they have time and ability to cope up with the new language being taught unlike for the adult who have other things to worry about and have less time, so it will be tough for them to devote time in learning new language.
Also, primary students are in the stage of their life where they are still figuring out what are the things they are interested in like science, arts or literature. So according to me they should be exposed to new language in the primary level, this will give them clear idea of subjects they want to study in the secondary school.
Teaching foreign language in primary school can be a disadvantage for few people who will not be taking the literature in future and are not planning to work in any international platform. Also, few students who are weak in their studies, for them it will be burden to study on extra language and take coaching classes.
So there are more advantages than disadvantage in my opinion. So it is best to add foreign language in the primary school curriculum rather than secondary school.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, still, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64726027397 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47059076492 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472602739726 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4082301365 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318397023811 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144227895383 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108089134031 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198194957949 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097368582413 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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