Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, learning a new language is necessary. And I think that this is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Some people reckon that study a new language at primary school is unnecessary. Firstly, children are too young to study a foreign language, parents think that it is not unsuitable time for their child to study a new language. Secondly, others parents believe that their children need more time for relax, they do not wanna take children to many class. It will make their child become tired.
On the other hand, I think it is better for children when they study foreign language when they are young, especially at primary school. First of all, currently all most school put foreign language in children's schedule as a extra subject, this is create a study environment for children. Next, when children study a new language when they are small, it will make them become confident when communicate with other people. Moreover, when they are young, it is easy for teacher to correct their speaking skill, and it develop a self-correcting habit in the future of children.
In conclusion, it may be have some bad points when children study a new language when they are young, I believe that it is better for children when they study foreign language at primary school/
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun class seems to be countable; consider using: 'many classes'.
Suggestion: many classes
...lax, they do not wanna take children to many class. It will make their child become tired....
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...reign language in childrens schedule as a extra subject, this is create a study e...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...ns schedule as a extra subject, this is create a study environment for children. Next,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'develops'?
Suggestion: develops
...to correct their speaking skill, and it develop a self-correcting habit in the future o...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90789473684 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54202520063 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464912280702 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1806292143 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389914758904 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189779074076 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185570257685 0.0667982634062 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325630197702 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169603560413 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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