some governments and organisations are confronting some problems, which one is the most pressing and solution to this.
It is irrefutable to say that every nation has one or the other problems burgeoned over the period of time. Problems like pollutions , crime, war,poverty has suppressd most nations. In this following essay i will discuss about the problems the nations are facing and the role of govermetn to mitigae those problems.
To begin with, the more we feel progressive with technology the more we are pushed backward due to the numerous problems in the world. There is always threat of nuclear war,also problems like hunger ,poverty, war crime, pollution has outcasted in many nations. For instance , In Syria civil wasr has resulted in the destruction of many national property , and has resulted in the miserable life of the citzens. Moreover, problems like poverty, pollution, is the result of these wars.
Furthermore, to mitigate these factors government should avoid was and try make treaties and implement them in the country. After many years of war Nepal regained it's freedom and is moving in a path of development.Although, the problem like pollution still prevails in many countries . To mitigate those problems government should take action against the polluters.
To recapitulate, nation cannot backout with the problems, it has to face the problems and one of the major decision a nation can make by educating its people about the impacts and consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21818181818 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92682874979 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9873715224 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.363636364 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666619362857 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284983070774 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278669468146 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048121279726 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336286865294 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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