Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion.
Recently, it has become common that some high schools oblige their students to do volunteer work in order to graduate. For some people, it is not necessary; however, it should be a valuable experiment and opportunity for them to make their profile more excellent.
While preparing for their future, high school is where they learn professional life skills. Volunteering enables such students to try their abilities, learn from the professionals how to do their job, and improve their social interaction. For instance, by talking with senior citizens, they are blessed to have this opportunity to reach out to those in their community and have the skills needed to perform significantly well in their jobs. Besides, volunteering may lead to a part-time job opportunity. If students can prove their dependability and hard work ethic, employers may take that into consideration and offer them a job. For example, after volunteering for several summers, they may able to get a job more easily.
In conclusion, the volunteering requirement in high school is an extremely rewarding activity that should be required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their social interaction. For instance, by talking with senior citizens, they ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28248587571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03468201011 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9730248635 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165334200308 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796135160086 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728943589647 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137392819168 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321502688467 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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