some individuals do activities which are considered as anti-social and criminal. society as a whole should be blamed for their activities
what is the cause of anti-social activities
who are responsible for their anti-social behavior
Few people cause harm to society by their actions which considered as a crime and anti-social activities. Their nuisance behavior towards the society is due to various reasons such as dominating rich society, which suppresses the poor people.
Some people trying to fulfill their wealth by doing wrong things. The various causes including poverty, ill-literacy and corruption. Above all reasons, ill-literacy is the main reason for such behavior. Poor people do not educate their children and they separated from the society or they may seem society as their enemy. so they always trying to harm the society. This may be due to the higher price of education as poor people are unable to educate their children in good school. As a government provides free education in rural areas but the facilities provided by government are insufficient.
Corrupt politicians are responsible for this discrimination as the government release various funds for poor people but these funds are not reached to them. So government should find direct ways to reach slum areas in cities or rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...r they may seem society as their enemy. so they always trying to harm the society....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22285714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73966480893 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2294800908 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262676312559 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909711800409 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953745927793 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176748035112 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947696940185 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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