Some of the museums and the artistics galleries have some tickets for the observation and viewing, while some of have a free entry. Although some time financial problem became major issue for a free museums, while others can have great facilities and proper maitainance which can directly obtain from admission charges. I think museums have to charge fee for the visitors. Both the view point is discussed further.
Foremost benefits for the charges are museums and art galleries can provide better facilities to the visitor and the better maintainance also increase the life of the museums as well as art galleries. Further more, admission fees also play a important role for the value of money and proper financial management also leads towards the bright future for the museums. For example, private museums and art galleries have a good facilities in forein country. They can also adopt the new technology which will improve the security and safety of the art and museums.
On the other hand, free museums and art galleries suffer the problem of finance. The major finance is obtain through the government which will lead to other problem. In addition to this, with the poor finance facilities also become poor as per time passed and the maintainance is also problem which can lead to the different damage of the infrastructure as well as the art. For instance, local historical places and museums are damaged in country like India because people do not have value of this places. Moreover this can lead towards to the end of history and art.
Overall, some of the places are chargeable while others are free. finance can lead to better infrastructure and good adoption of new technology, however free entry can do a lots of damage to this property. In my opinion, museums and art galleries must charge for the visitors.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
Some of the museums and the artistics galleries hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'museum'?
Suggestion: museum
...l problem became major issue for a free museums, while others can have great facilities...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Further more, admission fees also play a important role for the value of money a...
^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...roblem of finance. The major finance is obtain through the government which will lead ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...dia because people do not have value of this places. Moreover this can lead towards ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...eople do not have value of this places. Moreover this can lead towards to the end of his...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the end of history and art. Overall, some of the places are chargeable while others are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finance
...s are chargeable while others are free. finance can lead to better infrastructure and g...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...w technology, however free entry can do a lots of damage to this property. In my opini...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97394136808 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55155127395 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459283387622 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5736091114 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387183154725 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144138739969 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107851376014 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261736504908 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954610127807 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
Some of the museums and the artistics galleries hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'museum'?
Suggestion: museum
...l problem became major issue for a free museums, while others can have great facilities...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Further more, admission fees also play a important role for the value of money a...
^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...roblem of finance. The major finance is obtain through the government which will lead ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...dia because people do not have value of this places. Moreover this can lead towards ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...eople do not have value of this places. Moreover this can lead towards to the end of his...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the end of history and art. Overall, some of the places are chargeable while others are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finance
...s are chargeable while others are free. finance can lead to better infrastructure and g...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...w technology, however free entry can do a lots of damage to this property. In my opini...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97394136808 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55155127395 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459283387622 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5736091114 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387183154725 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144138739969 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107851376014 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261736504908 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954610127807 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.