In the competitive period many small scale business and stores faces the problem due to the growth and development of supermarkets. Some people believe that these will lead to the closer of the local stores and communities. I am completely disagree to these statement and my position is justifying further
The foremost reason is that, local shopowners and communities faces the difficulty towards the supermarket and these will lead to an end of the communities. In addition, with the closer of local business government can also effect with the economics. These will increase the distance between the rich and poor. For example, normal day to day things can not get directly from local shops and sometime supermarket is time consuming for a little routine things. Further more, Middle class people suffer a lot in daily life. Closer of local business is directly effect the local communities.
On the other hand, people believe that closer of local business will improve the country status and person's lifestyle. Moreover, Supermarkets provide a big discounts of some of the brands which will benefits to the customers. Also, supermarkets will help nation on the economic side. sometimes supermarkets will be the time saver because all the essential things are getting under one roof. For instance, people are more attracted towards the discounts items. In the last supermarkets are future for any developed nations and these will not stop.
To conclude, this essay argued that why the supermarkets are the reasons for the closer of local business and this will lead to the death of local communities. In my opinion i am strongly disagree to the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...stores and communities. I am completely disagree to these statement and my position is j...
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Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ommunities. I am completely disagree to these statement and my position is justifying further ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... is time consuming for a little routine things. Further more, Middle class people suff...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...Supermarkets provide a big discounts of some of the brands which will benefits to the custo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
... will help nation on the economic side. sometimes supermarkets will be the time saver bec...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ath of local communities. In my opinion i am strongly disagree to the statement.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...ommunities. In my opinion i am strongly disagree to the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15498154982 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75083279359 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505535055351 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7529040347 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336250803026 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112464691512 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826749674166 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216715484678 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00979008402987 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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