Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
It is true that most parents spend huge amounts of money for their children.It helps to improve their outlook and they can distract with toys.It has drawbacks such as dangerous toys.
To begin with,advantages parents buy many toys with different purposes of improving study or brain,children can improve their outlook and learn new subject.For example, they buy a phone toy to their kids.There are a lot of advantages of this phones and they may learn new alphabets and numbers. In my childhood, my father gave me a new car toy and I played it and shared with my friends.In addition, our children may be distracted with toys and we can work calmly.For instance, parents give children new toys to distract them and we may work without being distracted.
On the other hand, it has disadvantages like having dangerous toys.Some people buy toys like knife, childish weapons,Lego and others and they can be dangerous. For example, when children play without careful, they may get into the eyes.
In conclusion,providing children with more toys has both advantages and disadvantages.Parents should keep a regular check on their kid's toys and outlook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13829787234 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19154255275 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0802867765 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.1666666667 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350263861002 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173425678338 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690078075947 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206047402745 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734393147348 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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