some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and the diadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
At present, playing with toys among children is very common. A lot of toys is been purchased for children to play with by their parents. However, despite the beneficial effects of playing with toys, there are still some disadvantages which both of them will be explained in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, toys are seen as the commonest thing most children play with, in every family and which is very beneficial for their development. It was discovered that children who play with different types of toy learn faster than others. For example, between my two kid brothers, the one who that used toys like alphabet toys learnt how to recite the alphabet and how to sing some rhymes before entering the pre-nursery section in the school, unlike the other one that did not use any toy at all. Furthermore, using toys among children helps them to develop some special skills which usually help them in future and at the same time when choosing a career in life.
On the other hand, toys have its merits but there are some demerits that are associated with children that played with toys. Playing with toys among children makes them avoid most avoid most outdoor games like running, playing football etc, which help them to exercise themselves. This has led to some health-related problems in children especially obesity. For instance, a research conducted on the causes of obesity in children showed that 50% of the causes are as a result of lack of outdoor games. Also, when children play only with their toys, they are usually a problem of socialization. That is, they find it difficult to socialize with other children.
In summary, buying toys for children to play with is very beneficial, though because of its bad effect, this should be done with minimal selection by purchasing the educative ones which will help them in their cognitive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91139240506 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50754349815 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7189779147 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337181801971 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149889867919 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736423442804 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241148251802 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298268415566 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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