universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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...t subjects in schools is quite alarming.This has made some universities to start sel...
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...particular sex for a particular subject.Years back,girls are not allowed to go to sch...
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... sex for a particular subject.Years back,girls are not allowed to go to school let alo...
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...lented and knowledgeable than the female . For example,in Igbo land ,girls are not...
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...wledgeable than the female . For example,in Igbo land ,girls are not always traine...
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...an the female . For example,in Igbo land ,girls are not always trained beyond pri...
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...ample,in Igbo land ,girls are not always trained beyond primary school,instead th...
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...ot always trained beyond primary school,instead the elders will tell you that their edu...
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...education ends in their mothers kitchen.However,it is no longer the same because most ...
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...on ends in their mothers kitchen.However,it is no longer the same because most fem...
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...kitchen.However,it is no longer the same because most females are doing better in...
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... doing better in education more than the males. secondly,universities should a...
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...r in education more than the males. secondly,universities should allow every individ...
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...cation more than the males. secondly,universities should allow every individual to choose...
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...e time accept both equal male and female because ,the number of males in the scho...
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...cept both equal male and female because ,the number of males in the school is qui...
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...s quite bigger than that of the females.Furthermore,in those days in the universities,when ...
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...ger than that of the females.Furthermore,in those days in the universities,when it ...
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...ermore,in those days in the universities,when it comes to nursing profession ,they pr...
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...ties,when it comes to nursing profession ,they prefer given admission to the fema...
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...ofession ,they prefer given admission to the female students instead of the male ...
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... the female students instead of the male .This is because of the fact that they be...
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...he female students instead of the male .This is because of the fact that they believ...
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...e students instead of the male .This is because of the fact that they believe female nurses perform very...
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...es perform very well more than the male.Also,another reason is because nursing invol...
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...erform very well more than the male.Also,another reason is because nursing involves a lo...
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...hich they think that the male can not do very well. However,this thought was prov...
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...re than the female nurses. In summary,every individual have the right to education,...
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...y individual have the right to education,irrespective of the sex.This essay discussed the rea...
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...ht to education,irrespective of the sex.This essay discussed the reasons why univers...
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...ale which are to prove the believe that girls education ends in their parents kitchen...
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...rents kitchen wrong and to let the world know that both male and female students ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22349570201 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22329404333 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.476411683 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.3 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317146898648 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111404107768 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870271339017 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1914177546 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409365029873 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.