Some parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Since the dawn of civilization, family is an organization where all the members live together. Certain individuals ruminate that youngsters should be motivated to live on their own, however others reckon that family ought to allow them to live under the same roof until they want. Both perspectives will be scrutinized followed by a personal slant in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, children, who are permitted to reside separately from their families, become more responsible and self-reliant. That is to say, if young teens choose to stay solely then it is probably efficacious for their cognitive and physical growth since they learn to do multifarious task by themselves. Besides, by doing so, not only they become decision makers, but also their confidence level proliferate. A case in point, while living away from parents, children learn to do household chores namely washing, cleaning and cooking, at the same time, they also become capable to decide about their higher education and career as well.
On the paradoxical side, advocates of the latter view opine that young children should live with the family only as they are not mature enough to understand the pros and cons of society. As a matter of fact, they are more vulnerable to illicit activities and may fall pray to those, which may have detrimental impact on them down the road. Also, it is less likely to indulge into activities such as drug abuse under the influence of bad peer group as they are monitored by their parents all the time.
In compendium, while there are convincing arguments on both sides of the debate, it axiomatic that although lone living is a blessing in disguise because it inculcate them with confidence, yet I ponder that living with family is more propitious because children can remain safe from external factors of community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, such as, as a matter of fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61234742009 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 305.0 20.2975951904 1503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1505.0 106.682146367 1411% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 305.0 20.7667163134 1469% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213179089003 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213179089003 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119518384578 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293820044996 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 154.3 13.0946893788 1178% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -238.1 50.2224549098 -474% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 122.2 11.3001002004 1081% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.6 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.0 10.1190380762 1225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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