Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good. Others think children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Homework is a necessary evil, and all students have to go through this imperative academic requirement. Being pressurized of children by the homework burden has brought much attention worldwide;consequently, some people believe that children should be helped with homework by parents, while other individuals comprehend that kids should be independent enough to complete their assignments instead of looking for help.I am strongly concord with view point that guardians should not help children in homework, but there are some exceptions.
There are many compelling reasons why parents should not prompt their children with homework. First demerit is attributed to lack of cognitive skills . If children become dependent on their caretakers for their school homework, they would never able to develop paramount educational skills such as reading , writing , and learning in an efficient manner, which are very crucial to excel in academic career. Moreover, Children could develop the habit of spoon fooding and can suffer in later development of life , while they will pursue higher studies, because the basics were never learned, and in some cases situation become perilous. To quote an instance, a student who never learned the basics of numbering will nerve be able to achieve good grades in mathematics.Hence due to these all predominant reasons childrens should not be supported by their parents in their school assignments.
There is a school of thought which believes that looking at this thought provoking issue, it may call for some exceptions. Children going to primary schools are still at the stage of learning. While some of them are brilliant enough to garps the learning in no time, others may take some time, thus helping in such special conditions , helping children should not be seen as an evil task . It also believed that elementary school children can be a shy in nature and do not feel comfortable any doubt on a specific query and often become stressed, thus the role of parents become vital to clear doubts of children to overcome the burden of homework.
To conclude, Overall, I believe that homework must be done by children only to avoid future crisis. Though there are several exceptions, these are not much prominent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, thus, while, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29247910864 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85576193742 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568245125348 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.731981975 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.153846154 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372336906992 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125254604287 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113764371267 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220487393934 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098452531092 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.