Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good Others think children should do their homework on their own Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good. Others think children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different opinions about whether parents ought to help their children with their homework or not. While sometimes children should be helped when they have difficulty understanding certain lessons, I believe that they should be encouraged to do their homework on their own.

On the one hand, there are some instances when children really need parents’ help in their homework. Firstly, when students are unable to comprehend some difficult concepts profoundly, parents should help them to do their homework; consequently, that subject will not be a burden for them. Moreover, some students are introverts and hesitate to ask their doubts in their class. However, they are more comfortable asking anything to their parents. Hence, there is no harm in helping the students to better understand the concepts, as it would eliminate the elements that hamper their growth in studies.

On the other hand, I think that students should be motivated to complete their homework by themselves. First of all, when learners do their homework by putting in huge amount of effort and time, they tend to retain that for longer time span than the pupils who take others’ help in their work. Furthermore, the self-esteem of students get a boost) when they complete their homework on their own. For instance, child psychologists have revealed that pupils who do homework without support are more confident, creative and active in their class. Therefore, letting children learn on their own enhances their intellectual ability.

In conclusion, even though children sometimes benefit from parental support in the homework, I believe that parents should encourage their children to do on their own as it is pivotal for improving their cognitive abilities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36462093863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69329564696 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6630183015 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2307692308 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563747840571 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247430321146 0.084324248473 293% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977261853052 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404678810717 0.151304729494 267% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321944784044 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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