Some peopel believ that elederly employees more useful to a company, while other beleive that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the new millennium, skilled as well as crisp, both worker are helpful for the firm. A host of people say, senior people are additionally usefull whereas some believe that beginners are finer. Each view point has their own vindication I will discuss both the views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with aged employees are expert person, who know better than freshers. The most obvious benfit of giving chance to pensioner is that they are ready to encounter with difficult problems in a business. To elaborate, the veteran worker already know how to combat with circumstances in a firm. The main reason behind this is that they are aware about uncertanities in a industry in which a new commers are not aware about that. To cite an example, According to a 2010 Pew Research Center survey, nearly six in 10 respndents cited work ethic as one of the big difference between yound and old. Asked who has the better work ethic, about the three fourth of people said that older people are batter.
Apart from this, recently workers were also peovide sake to a company. One advantage of giving time to fresher help to whip up the ideas. To clarify, beginners learned each skill by the state of the art technology in which they know how to fulfill the demand of the buyer in a keen time, whereas old worker has a outmoded to execute duties in which work at a leisurely pace and less profitalble but young employees have born in technological world their minds are sharp than senior ones. Hence, they are extremely beneficial than experienced persons.
In conclusion, both points has their own views which laready discuss but according to my prespective giving first priority to young employees is benficial for industry as well as for the world.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-07-20 | Navjotsingh21819@gmail.com | 78 | view |
- Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being celebrity brings more benfits or more problems Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from you own knowledg 47
- As most of people spend a major part of their adult life at work job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being What factors contribute to job satisfaction How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers 89
- Some people think that helping their children with homework is a good idea other believe children should do their homework on their own Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing martial arts should be banned from TV and international sporting competitions To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish They believe that this not only better for their health but also benefits the world as whole Discuss both the views and give your pwn opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t they are aware about uncertanities in a industry in which a new commers are not...
^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...fy, beginners learned each skill by the state of the art technology in which they know how to fu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in a keen time, whereas old worker has a outmoded to execute duties in which wor...
^
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ung employees is benficial for industry as well as for the world.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, whereas, apart from, as for, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79470198675 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55967761171 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3125303168 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154721029228 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047724311911 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542967985074 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105992894889 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054529673899 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.