Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Many people hold the view that capital punishment should be abolished because it is a cruel and unusual punishment while others maintain that this is necessary for a better society. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and offer my opinion.
On the one hand, it is clear that capital punishment would bring about a number of advantages. First and foremost, one of the main upsides of death penalty is that it deters criminals from murdering. For instance, numerous studies in the USA show a noticeable drop in murder rate in the months directly following any execution. Secondly, use of the death punishment prevents murders from killing again. Serial killers who are hardened as to be incapable of reform should be removed permanently from society before he or she continues to kill other innocent people.
On the other hand, death penalty can be considered unacceptable because of several reasons. Firstly, one of the biggest downsides of capital punishment is that it infringes human rights. Particularly, we have no rights to put someone to death, no matter what the crime is. Another disadvantage of death punishment is that innocent people can be killed of unfair sentence. A single mistaken execution of an innocent person, among no matter many thousands of cases, is enough to destroy our trust in the death penalty and in any judicial system that uses it.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that while capital punishment has a range of drawbacks such as violating human rights and unfair executions of guiltless people, it brings a number of merits: deterrent of major crimes and prevention of re-offending killers. After the final analysis, my own view is that the advantages of death penalty may outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enalty may outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10402684564 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8101818004 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2234791829 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316089169322 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110445998386 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601628538454 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193184149846 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547374491973 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.