Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
The trade-off between job satisfaction and high income has always been a confusing topic that people consider when it comes to carrier orientation. While I accept that take a high salary job is a good choice, I believe that a passionate job should come first.
On the one hand, people who earn a lot of money have both advantages and disadvantages. Firstly, people obtaining high income will be able to deal with their financial problems because they can meet basic human need. For example, they can buy luxury goods such as big houses, expensive cars or updated gadgets, something like that. As a result, people may feel happy because their stratification in society increasing. Secondly, the drawback thing when people have a high income is that they no time with family members and even their own. The reason is they overburden with work, the spend much time only for working consequently. In addition, they will be full of stress in accomplishing their workload.
On the other hand, an enjoyable job offer citizens a nmber of benefits. Firstly, people can increae motivation in finishing workload . Because people can pursue their dream occupation, they will have inspiration to devote themselves to the jobs. It is true that job satisfaction is a great source of strength which helps people overcome difficulties they may encounter at the workplace. Secondly, when people do an enjpyable job, it not only help them have more inspiration of work but also avoid the pressures from work. For example, a person who’s unsatisfied with his or her work can feel stress and be nervous and this state could produce negative impact to other spheres of his life like family, health and etc.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it is the best to have an enjoyable job, however, it depends on individuals to choose one over another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95765472313 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.734938207 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7858605781 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1875 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190085273745 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659818853751 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04732155505 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115894947623 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193862195555 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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