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The bar chart illustrates figures for the sales of eight different items in two London bakeries, Lovely Loaves and Bernie’s Buns, on a typical Saturday in 2010.
Overall, Bernie’s Buns sales more of each item than Lovely Loaves ( expect for fresh loaves and salads). Another interesting point is that, doughnuts were the most popular item in both Bernie’s Buns and Lovely Loaves.
Looking at the details, doughnuts come top of the list of both bakeries at about 135 donuts every Saturday for Bernie's Buns. Lovely Loaves sold nearly 20 fewer doughnuts than Bernie's Buns at around 120. Likewise, cookies are the second best sellers in Bernie’s Buns and Lovely Loaves. The figures are under 120 and over 60 respectively. It can be seen that Bernie’s Buns sold more of the items as compared to Lovely Loaves. By contrast, Lovely Loaves sold more than three times the number of salads as compared to Bernie's Buns, at under 20 for Bernie’s Buns and over 60 for Lovely Loaves.
Futhermore, we can also looking out that, the approximate number of confectionary items are higher than that of the savoury food in both bakeries . For instance, both Bernie’s Buns and Lovely Loaves sells slightly more rolls than cripsps, at around 75 and 50 for rolls and about 68 and 45 for cripsp with both Bernie’s Buns and Lovely Loaves . Cakes are also popular at over 100 and under 80 respectively. Finally, toasted sandwiches are nearly the least popular item in both , at around 25 sold for Bernie’s Buns and about 22 sold for Lovely Loaves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, likewise, look, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73099230781 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459770114943 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2837809411 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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