Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that a satisfying job is more essential than a secure one. At the same time, some people hold the belief that a long-lasting job is much more vital. From my perspective, I would take side with the latter.
On the one hand, the stability and credibility of a permanent job is somewhat undeniable. In terms of finance, a long-lasting job ensures workers to have a stable monthly income which enables them to have better control over their expenditure plans. It is even more crucial for employees who act as a primary breadwinner in their family. Moreover, with the work force becoming more and more competitive than ever, switching job might be a risky decision as it would lead employees to the verge of unemployment. As a consequence, they would have to confront with financial problems in a short or even long period of time. It is not to mention that higher organization commitment results in not only higher chance of promotion but also better salary.
On the other hand, those who are in favour of a job satisfaction find themselves in better mental health and higher productivity at work. Being able to work in pleasure will not only lower workers’ stress and burnout levels but also improve their welfare in the long run. Along with well-being, a satisfying job also boost employees’ energy and work inspirations, which would bring great effect on their performance and productivity at work.
All in all, although each opinion have its own merits but we should play it safe and seek for security at work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84410646388 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81111278701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2159858783 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23991989173 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936605121493 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968181184544 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150722865213 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899872949512 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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