Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact.
Discuss both these views and give your own opnion.
Thanks to fast-paced development of technology and escalating demands for work and study abroad, the advent of economical flights has considerably improved the accessity to many different countries and regions, which makes the aforementioned tendency appear as an optimal choice when people take traveling into consideration. However, against the preference for this phenomenon, there exists a perception that air travel with low cost has had a significant detriment on the quality of international counterpart. From my personal viewpoint, benefits regarding traveling accessity from the suggested practice outweigh its reverse effects. The essay below will give certain ideas to dicuss both views, along with demonstrating the author's personal perspective above.
As stated in the essay's introduction, inexpensive air flights have been indeed significantly beneficial by their progress to offer more accessible tours, trips and excursions across the globe. Accordingly, as more companies, organisations, educational institutions and households are in demands to travel abroad for business, study or accommodation purposes on higher frequency, the price of air travel has been cut down to respond to such requirements from these groups of travellers. This may result in booking for overseas travels with only few clicks of button and a narrower range of adminsistrative papers than the previous years to verify the client's personal information. Traveling among nation would in turn less complexing and merely take several hours to settle in the destined locations, invovlving a minimal quantity of finances, assignments for travel verification or geographical barriers.
Despite its mentioned advantage, economical flights may present a major drawback. This means a higher contribution to the risks of global terrorism. Respective of the given concept, terrorist components are able to assimilate into the index of passengers in the airplane, once they could afford to book for a flight with less extortionate outlay which often synchrodises with lower finances on security guarantee at the airport. Terrorists would thereby organise lethal attacks in not only their local regions, but also foreign destinations. The referred drawback might be threatening, however; it can be effecitvely address by extracting a vast proportion of travel cost to invest into streghtening security before flight departures and arrivals.
In conclusion, in spite of the major negative impact related to security, air travel consisting of low cost should be selected as a common traveling method, if any efficient measures are taken to address its adverse bearing on the quality of flight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73299748111 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16562257762 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64483627204 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1082263538 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.571428571 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3571428571 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209010989217 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630801814465 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472748370249 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123832420341 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593259902925 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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