Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes seriouspollution and use up world’s fuel resources.
Nowadays some may hold the opinion that air travel is considered to be responsible for alarming pollution. In addition to this, It leads to running out of fuel reserves all around the world. I completely agree with this view because it is likely to pollute the environment and use up world reserves. However, some positive factors are paid attention to run the air travel ,like saving time along with economic profit.
To start with, one of the reason why restriction should be accomplished is great air pollution. In other words, it causes different diseases that suffering humanity ,such as heart illnesses ,breath taking ailments ,as a consequence of air pollution emitting air transports permanently. For example, airplanes and hovercrafts have been the basis of air pollution since turning of the last century.
Besides that, in recent years many countries are bound to face the lack of fuel, this is because use of excessive amount for air travel will bring to reduce world fuel resources. Therefore, the reduction of fuel reserves which using up excessively will be responsible for air travel.
On the other hand, the usage of airlines has positive sides that preventing from wasting time. Meaning that, automobiles, buses as well as trains are the transports that time consuming ,unlike air transports. For instance, traveling from one country to another one takes two days by land whereas hovercrafts can do 30 minutes. In addition, huge amount of money is gained by means of them.
As to why I totally agree, the air travel that posses some fatal consequences causes to disastrous pollution and the disappearance of fuel resources, also It can be seen the beneficial factors that economize time and make momey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09187279152 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76580273121 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8565172841 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341679107329 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108698641918 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789691303135 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182443428101 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877470488341 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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