Some people believe that air travels should be allowed to grow without limits. Others think that the government should limit air travels. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
It is often argued that, aviation must be increase unconditionally, mean while, many people oppose as well. Since, time and energy could be save when we use flight as a transport service, however, in my opinion air traffic should be reduce to some extent because, atmospheric pollution and fossil fuels limit might be helpful to the earth.
Plain journey has been spreading rapidly in terms of tours and travels, business trips, pop across needs of peoples. By the virtue of that some people explain to the needs of excess usage of air travels. International services would enhance trade and commerce, education and career and so on, along with domestic aviation would reduce road traffic congestion and easy access of destination. For example, accidental report to attend an interview from distant states help me to reach at the appropriate time by the use of flight.
On the other hand, people who oppose continuous use of air travel may inhibit atmospheric stability, excess pollution and freedom of aves some how. Firstly, air traffic would produce more sounds and noises, secondly, which excrete huge amount of fossil fuel fume. Make use of plain services may lead to destruction of normal stable condition of atmosphere and detrimental effect on to the earth and global regulatory field. For instance, recent survey report from BBC explain that, air traffic congestion are prone to develop alternation of temperature in atmosphere.
Irrespective of, easy access and some financial benefits, my perspective to the aviation would be with environmental protection and longevity of this beautiful earth stability. Fast going life may lead to approach such pleasant travel in the air although, as a human being, we should consider every offspring of this planet and keep surroundings with free from pollution and let persist in.
To conclude, nowadays, air flying is inevitable in our day to day life and progress. Nevertheless, wide use of such services may lead to endangered mechanism of earth.Some people believe that air travels should be allowed to grow without limits. Others think that the government should limit air travels. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24857142857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75266757104 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608571428571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6795640824 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378527681936 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130187365237 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143706115699 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215758022165 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195667892788 0.056905535591 344% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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