Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
discuss both these vies and give your own opinion.
Controversy about how much liberty should give to children in everyday life is an interesting topic to discuss. Some groups of people believe that children should be granted to choose their preference related to what they eat, wear, or watch. However, some people opine that liberty for children will create a self-centered and selfish attitude. In my opinion, parents should neither give absolute privilege nor restrain in every matter. It is supposed to be a balance.
To begin with, giving children access to do whatever they want and authorizing them to choose everything they like would increase a sense of “can-do” everything among youngsters. This notion led to a detrimental effect on mental health, such as selfish and self-centered. Researchers from the physiology department of Melbourne University conveyed that children’s experience has a permanent record on the brain and will impact the way of thinking and behavior in later age. Therefore, parents must help and guide their offspring in making decisions, particularly in assessing good and bad effects. Following this, parents should deter their children from doing harmful things that could affect mental health.
On the other hand, activities that limit or restrict children from choosing their preferred things will provoke a negative impact such as less confidence and anti-social. Many teachers from primary school said that children who do not have the liberty to do everything they like tend to have less creativity. Following this, children who suffer from those conditions seem to be silent and do not interact with their counterparts.
All in all, even though children should be allowed to make their own choices, parents should give a guideline and boundaries to deter from a harmful effect. The balance will lead to creating a better generation which has creativity and selflessness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39115646259 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84180569278 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3080567875 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215944087657 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665211414496 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496183518764 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127013219275 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310356115507 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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