Some people believe that charity organization should help people wherever they live, other think that should attend their countries only. Discuss both views.
One of the most topical issue in the modern society is poverty.There are those who say that the charity organisation should assist poor individuals for make their better future and healthy lifestyle where they live however other believe that countries should only participate in this organisation and spend money on it.this essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.
Generally speaking, perhaps the most compelling reason why charity organization should help humans is because poverty is increasing day by day. we should focus on it.this means that unless developed countries assist poor people, crime rate will rise over the period, such as robbery, theaft, and Murders etc. A recent research concluded by harvard university, half million people were dead in Africa due to the poverty.
Despite these arguments there is also a case for the idea that countries should only attend this organization. perhaps the main reason why masses are in favour of this idea is because they can collect more money budget for pitiful persons. For example, last year America spend 10 billion dollars in all over the world for people who are living below the red line. The decision as to whether we should control poverty rate, it must be seen in the context of entire society.
To sum up, this is a topic which is very relevant to the modern society. Having considered both sides of the issue, I would argue that both sides are crucial.But If countries spend more money for poverty, crime rate will decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as to, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09019607843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4526394385 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9149584364 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244947003644 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808658274511 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549726446144 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137041883162 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531098941563 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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