Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise, they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Many people believe that " education is the key to success " even the noble prize winner miss Malala says one book, one pen and, one teacher can change the whole world. Therefore, i agree that teenagers free time activites should be replaced with academic classes and reasons for the same are given below.
To initiate with, leisure activities like sports requires more invesment and are physically tiring as compared to academic classes. For instance, sports such as Hockey, scoocer, badmenton, basketball etc requires certain style of equipment and cloths, which are expensive and are not affordable for every individual. However, educational activities does not require any of it rather then books which are buyable and easily available anywhere in the locality. Futhermore education is not limited to examinations but it also helps to enhance the mental ability along the line of creative ideas. In addition to that, academic classes are not exhausting.
Secondly, free time activites are time consuming and are detrimental. For example, every sports have its own dress codes and before going for practise children have the change their cloths and after pratice a compalsory bath is required, which in case of academic classes are not necessary. Moreover, while playing students can get hurt were as such risks are not associated with educational activities.
In conclusion, educational activities are more effecient, less time consuming and, cost efffective as well. In less time huge amount of knowledge can be gained in accordance with the academic classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39516129032 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68324279249 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4917574952 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155037248993 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536432384707 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303711667101 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918519690104 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125116772365 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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