Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but other consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
<span id="docs-internal-guid-373e87f4-7fff-2849-e6f7-f4f502d01abe"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">There is a propensity think that commercialize tourism impact negative on culture. Otherwise, others put forwards an argument that culture can be preserved by development of the tourism. This essay will shed illumine both active and passtive effects of tourism from a cultural perspective.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">On the positive side, it is clear that, tourism has significant contributions for cultural preservation. Cultural, which characteristics of each locality can know all over the world by promotional activities. Beside, when a country's cultural heritage resonated to many people, it will be protected by organizations around the world such as UNESCO. Never can protect and diffuse culture if do not have money. Tourism which is one of the most important activities bring huge sums which used for subsequently directed toward cultural protection, maintenance of key historical sites which suffered the great devastation of time.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">Otherwise, cultural are gradually degenerated by the rapid development of tourism industries. Overcrowding people visiting a place will cause serious problems such as traffic jam, trash, petty theft. Food, festivals, costumes and other stimulating elements of a culture will be modified to entertain tourists. When national cultural values become a means of making money, it loses sacredness and nature. </span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">In summary, there is a heated dispute that the development of tourism now has a great impact on current state of culture. It is clear that, tourism helps to spread and preserve the culture and it is an irrefutable fact that the negative effects of tourism.</span></p><div><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"><br></span></div></span>
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| 2019-11-19 | leduyen9798 | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2864.0 1615.20841683 177% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 8.5748502994 5.12529762239 167% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.1971179582 2.80592935109 328% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523952095808 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.670248763 49.4020404114 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.363636364 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.3636363636 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978494286968 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721370370786 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451890364084 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978494286968 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.1 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.19 50.2224549098 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.3 11.3001002004 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.02 12.4159519038 266% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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