Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, thanks to the accelerating development of technology, a number of revolutionary breakthroughs have invented and one of the most significant ones is artificial intelligent technology. Many people concern that the AI system can create negative impacts on civilization. However, others think that it is strikingly beneficial to society and I agree with this opinion.
On the one hand, some individuals are worried about the massive consequences which the AI can have. Firstly, AI, nowadays, is used for producing autonomous weapons which are programmed to kill and devastate. As the kind of weapon has huge devastating power, therefore, if it is misused and abused by criminals as well as terrorists, it can cause mass casualties. Secondly, humans can be put under great threat of being controlled by robots with human-like characteristics. In fact, the AI technology can make these robots become more intelligent than any human. It is likely that humans could be taken over by machines and have no longer take over the planet completely and permanently.
On the other hand, personally I think that the AI system can bring a lot of positive effects on human life. The first benefit is that this breakthrough can make significant contributions to reducing the workload of humans. For example, thanks to AI, workers do not have to perform backbreaking tasks and tasks which require intensive human labour, thus allowing them to do the more interpersonal and creative aspects of work. Furthermore, in some certain aspects of work, AI system can outperform and complete more precisely than human. For instance, it can make more precise predictions about extreme events, which could help researchers have an increased understanding of the effects and reasons for climate change. As a result, they could find many optimum methods to minimize the unforeseen consequences of climate shift.
In conclusion, although many people think that AI technology can cause adverse impacts on human life, I argue that human can get a wide variety of benefits from the advanced technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27027027027 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04609621082 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4017766097 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6875 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156517916956 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054114677715 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420688836537 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961178537448 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357224983888 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.