Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a
positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we
are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
With the presence of scientific and technological revolution, Artificial Intelligence gradually places an indispensable role in almost fields. Its massive merits to human beings are incontrovertible but simultaneously concerns whether AI is intelligent than humans.
In terms of the predominant advantages, the great volume of efficiencies that AI’s assistance for human workplace is apparently. Firstly, machinery systems can increase the productivity of an organisation that improves the Per Capita Income of a nation. Moreover, advances in technology help diminish the tension of dangerous and poisonous work environment then create a happiness and satisfaction. To exemplify, in particular sectors as the mining industry, the risk of mines collapse is sometimes on the horizon so automatic robots or machines can engage in this work to minimalize the mortality rate. Another striking feature of AI is its universal application in the medical sector. Doctors now can easily take effective measures to specific disorders because machinery equipped with incredibly monitoring and diagnostic capabitities would recognize diseases.
However, the argument that modern technology might have threatened the position of humans in the world is valid to some extent. Because Artificial Intelligence is able to undertake most of the tasks from the manufacture process of a commodity to the community service, unemployment has become an alarming issues in many countries. Regarding the certain highly-skilled workers, they will succeed wildly in this new environment but blue-collar workers are on the verge of losing jobs. Besides, the popularity of cutting-edge devices is the principal culprit of creativity decline in the younger generation. Youngsters totally rely on the programes these devices provide them and steadily limit the creative and innovative immitations.
In conclusion, it is understandable that some concerns about the threats of AI to the human position. In my personal perspective, its advantages overshadow the disadvantages and AI will become a driving force behind human society’s development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86731391586 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34750185765 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653721682848 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2880094703 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.866666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100736918505 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300471166466 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368605448435 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063047109119 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042466300969 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.53 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.