Some people believe everyone has a right to get university education. To what extent do you agree government should make it free for all people no matter of their financial background?
In today’s modern world, there is a belief in some people that youngster must be gone to university or college and gained knowledge, whilst the government should be paid all the tuition fees for students without regard to their circumstantial finance. However, I personally disagree with this statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
From the view of educational quality, we can imagine that it will be witnessed a significant decline if there are excessive students in one class. First, a class with too many pupils will decrease the interaction of teacher with all of students. For instance, it will be difficult for students to absorb the knowledge and learn the essential skills from their lecture. Second, admit numerous students and free all tuition will reduce the quality of the school’s training. Because of the free school fees, students can become lazier than in the past, they do not need to think about the money they have to pay if they fail exams. Therefore, the result for these problems are the backwardness of education compared to other countries.
Another significant reason is that the government will be pushed to the verge of bankruptcy. The student tuition fees which is paid by government each year will put a large pressure on the state economy. There will be experienced a dramatic rise in tax of some goods and it can reduce people’s income in a near future.
In conclusion, letting the government pay fees will lead to many negative issues to their citizens and the economy of that country. There are some ideas for this issue such as give more opportunity about the scholarships or exemption for poor people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94680851064 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69430981272 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3628512783 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166825083522 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584845540417 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448298490721 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104106925032 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255183334447 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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