Some people believe that going to college is the best way to successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
After graduating from school, people wonder whether they should get higher education or they ought to land a job. While I think that going to college is the best route to a successful career, I agree with the view that there are also some benefits to working after school.
On the one hand, it is believed that continuing their study is beneficial for students. To specify, by acquiring academic qualifications, people can have more job opportunities, which opens the door to a better life. Moreover, entering higher education helps students to obtain specialized knowledge, which enables them to climb up their career ladder. For example, if a student wants to become a doctor, he must have a relevant degree which provides them with in-depth knowledge about medicines, diseases and health problems. Hence, it is easy for him to win promotion and pursue his own passion.
However, getting a job after school can also bring several advantages. Firstly, students can earn money as soon as possible. By doing this, they are able to mature themselves, which enables them to live independently. Another benefit worth considering is that people will have a chance to put their knowledge into real situations. Therefore, they can hone a great deal of practical experience, which leads to improvement in career prospects.
In conclusion, not only going to college but also working straight after school make students succeed in their life as well as have a bright future.
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- Some people believe that going to college is the best way to successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. 56
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successfulcareer, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13278008299 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75910834239 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2388301158 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266318780313 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805779661409 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088316623602 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16497092156 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101099785385 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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