Some people are convinced that risky sports ought to be prohibited whilst others have the love for freedom in whatever sports they love. Seeing humankind conquering the challenges seems to hold more appeals to me.
On one hand, as we all know, not everyone has enough bravery to face the dangerous challenges.Why? It’s due to the every-minute-risk, just a little mistake and you’ll be regreted. To begin with, unless you’ve acquired enough skills and become well-trained, it’s advisable that you play it safe or you’ll have to suffer obsession and regrets in the rest of your life.Moreover, not only playing extreme sports can harm you but it can also damage the surroundings and injure others such as boxing, bull riding etc. that are cruel and may cause physical and mental injuries.
On the other hand, “It’s gonna be hard, but hard is not impossible”. Trying and doing what you want is living not just existing, i highly recommend you play whatever sport you like. Furthermore, It’s your passion and desire that support you in dangerous sports, try your best and hard work will be paid off. Many people tried and failed and just failed...but they keep going, and they succeeded! Another thing is the satisfaction when you “get there”... you can be stronger in life, it’ll be more easier for you to manage life. Granted, have you ever heard of Philippe Petit? In 1974, he walked on a rope 400m heights between the Twin Towers.
All in all, the power of humanity is unlimited, and you were born to live, not to just exist, play whatever sport you want but always try to keep it as safe as possible.
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Nowadays more and more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face Is this a positive or negative development 89
- These days children spend more time on doing homework or participating in school-related activities or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want. 70
- Some people believe that the use of mobile phones in public is as annoying as smoking and should be banned, similarly to smoking. Give your opinion and examples from your own experience 73
- Is it good for children to start using computers from an early ageand spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages anddisadvantages. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Why
...ravery to face the dangerous challenges.Why? It's due to the every-minute-risk...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...on and regrets in the rest of your life.Moreover, not only playing extreme sports can ha...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... can be stronger in life, it'll be more easier for you to manage life. Granted, have y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, another thing, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96415770609 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89671822546 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4920826078 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133064030088 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509123828445 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731678819911 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107921100134 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748355765364 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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