In the age of 4.0 industrialization, that there has been a significant increase in population lives up an issue for almost every single area worldwide. Thereby, this essay will depict the arouse problems transparently and put forward some practical methods to tackle it.
To begin with, it is the problem of economy. The widespread overpopulation has had influences on not only developing countries but developed nations as well. The unemployment, as a result of overpopulation, is now a stubborn issue. Moreover, this also leads to the shortage of foods, products and life neccessities. Another consequence is the poverty and diseases which can also increase many social maladies. Secondly saying, naturally, overpopulation causes to the shortage of land, places to live. Therefore, despite having developed, many nations are too crowded to keep raising its standards. Granted, the USA has 11.500 immigrants per day. In other words, it will be more 35 millions in the next 10 years, which approximate the total population of New York, Chicago, Detroit, Los Angeles, Philadelphia today.
The question is “How will humankind curb the problems?”. In my prospective, i am going to mention some solutions being possibly helpful. First, it is the governments and families’ responsibilities to be conscious of the issue and together collabrate. The number of children in each family should be limited by 2 or 3. It is called “family planning”. Furthermore, this solution should be highly evaluated since it has reduced the population recently. Second, every nation should lay out the laws limiting the immigrants each time, so as to avoid being too crowded, which can restrict the economy and other fields. The systems have to be well-organised and tackled justifiably.
To recapitulate, humankind should stop thinking about themselves right now, for the benefits of the whole world. I am convinced that this issue will be curbed someday if we keep taking practical measures. It is all for a better world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35736677116 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29216593466 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645768025078 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9986597926 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6818181818 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16109189604 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453980798846 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482495868781 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104180500814 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417180095047 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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