It is undoubtedly that these days parents and children are more familiar with each other, there are certain masses who think that a greater age gap between guardians and kids is more useful. While, in my point of view it has more pros than cons of having big age difference which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, if there is a lot of difference between age of parents and children so parents will have more experience of life which they will help their children to achieve greater Heights. Moreover, it is a responsibility of parents to become role model for their children which will boost the confidence of children as it can encourage them to take the right decision in their life for getting good membership of society.
On the other hand, low age variation produces greater friendly atmosphere which children may able to express feelings and emotions with parents without hesitation. For an instance, a recent survey which was held in a University of Canada has proven that today's parents and children are more close as a best friend who have low age gap. Additionally, majority of children prefer to spend their precious time with parents so they can guide them for a right way.
To conclude, I personally believe that low difference between age will be more essential because they can understand each other easily and parents teach children according to latest technology as well as education.
- As compared to the past children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 89
- Some people believe that a great difference in age between people and children is more beneficial Do you think the advantages of a greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 67
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 47
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ween guardians and kids is more useful. While, in my point of view it has more pros t...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... parents and children are more close as a best friend who have low age gap. Addi...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...ly and parents teach children according to latest technology as well as education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91358024691 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63133892166 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539094650206 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8588813964 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24964066636 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126826172688 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06593139902 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178542996394 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473964988465 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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