Some people believe that having access to the internet is necessary to live a full life today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">In the today’s world, the internet has become an essential part of everyday life. The opinion exists that the internet is a compulsory thing that people cannot live without it. This essay will discuss the reality of the internet that have crucial effects on our life.
From an overall perspective, there are a number of reasons why people believe that being connected to the internet is a necessity. The primary argument supporting this idea is that in these days, people are using the internet as the main communication tool. Unless the past, they are able to being connected with each others all the time, without regardless of how they far away. Secondly, the media have been recreated by the internet. The conventional methods of media, such as printed newspapers, magazines do not exist any more. Today, If people want to get information about recent news, research project and want to watch a movie or documentary, they need internet. Another argument for some countries, such as Turkey, people have been offered to apply for government issues by using the internet, and this is considered a time saving feature for them.
On the other hand, unlike those arguments, some people are still thinking that they can maintain their life without having access to the internet. In a way, they could be right. The humankind had not been having internet access for almost ten thousand years and they have still been existing up to now.
In conclusion, I agree with the idea that the internet connection has an undeniable place in our life. However, it is not mandatory for making people alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14338235294 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83457551304 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8869586823 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26815073916 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886319813248 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504971533826 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163907145693 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201022890333 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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