Some people believe that having access to the internet is necessary to live a full life today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal">In the today’s world, the internet has become an essential
part of everyday life. The opinion exists that the internet is a compulsory
thing that people cannot live without it. This essay will discuss the reality
of the internet that have crucial effects on our life.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">From an overall perspective, there are a number of reasons
why people believe that being connected to the internet is a necessity. The
primary argument supporting this idea is that in these days, people are using
the internet as the main communication tool. Unless the past, they are able to
being connected with each others all the time, without regardless of how they
far away. Secondly, the media have been recreated by the internet. The
conventional methods of media, such as printed newspapers, magazines do not
exist any more. Today, If people want to get information about recent news,
research project and want to watch a movie or documentary, they need internet. There
is another argument for some countries, such as Turkey, people have been
offered to apply for government issues by using the internet, and this is
considered a time saving feature for them.<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On the other hand, unlike those arguments, some people are
still thinking that they can maintain their life without having access to the
internet. In a way, they could be right. The humankind had not been having
internet access for almost ten thousand years and they have still been existing
up to now.<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, I agree with the idea that the internet
connection has an undeniable place in our life. However, it is not mandatory
for making people alive.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99641577061 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.78622538042 2.80592935109 171% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.826992584 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216446583739 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825186810818 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497887290377 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069576540972 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472720349771 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.82 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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