Some people believe that if the police force carries guns, it would encourage a higher level of violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
Police forces are known as the first defense system of a country. As a result, they can be seen carrying weapons in some countries. While these weapons are used to defend and help citizens, on most occasions it is the opposite situation. In this essay I agree that guns carried by the police can stimulate a rise in violent behavior in the society because it symbolizes violence and for it strikes fear inside citizen's heart more than peace.
Firstly, guns are commonly associated with violence. Although police forces uses weapons to defend themselves against unwanted situation, it is still seen not for peace. If carrying weapons are normalized in a society, it can stimulate the rise of violent behaviour and criminal activity. It has been proven through Psychology that guns can stipulate a person's violent behaviour.
Secondly, people has always been afraid of weapons. When police forces carries weapons, it does not send a message of peace, instead, people become very fearful and when humans are afraid or panics, they often react in the form of violence. In fact, scientists have found that panic shootings have happened throughout the world because the shooter felt threatened by the police's weapons.
To end, police officers uses guns to aid their job in keeping the peace of their country and its citizens. On the contrary, weapons can send the wrong message because it is a symbol to violence and can stipulate such behavior, and for it makes people afraid and therefore resulted in unwanted dangerous situations. As a result, it can help encourage an increase in violent behaviour among the society.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in fact, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56406008099 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5542116097 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157595853229 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548074266766 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367963572295 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098078504801 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255515029481 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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