Nowadays, there are many countries speaking out their interests in investing in nuclear power. Not only can it powered electricity, but also supplied tons of clean energy. However, one push of a wrong button can set off a nuclear bomb, sending blasts and radiations that could kill millions and hurt others. thousands of meetings are held by world leaders in discussing the threats and advantages nuclear energy can impose. I disagree that there are more advantages to nuclear power than its disadvantages.
First of all, nuclear energy can generate weapons that can slaughter millions and its radiation can affect billions of people and their descendants. Although these weapons are handled with such care, mistakes can happen and it just is not worth the risk of humanity. The results of such bombs can be seen throughout history, one of them is the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki during world war two. Innocent lives were lost and thousands of people were rendered disabled, even those born long after the massacre suffered the consequences.
Second of all, the radiation that nuclear power plants emitted is so dangerous that it might contaminate the environments surrounding it, including water, soil, plants, and animals. The environment that was exposed to radiation then enters the life cycle and the radiation could then risk human exposure. it was not only the environment, but people working in the power plant or near it can also suffered contamination. We have seen how nuclear radiation can impact humanity through the Chernobyl incident in Russia.
To end, while nuclear energy can bring lots of positive impacts to energy conservation and technology advancement, it can also bring death and destruction worse than any human can imagine. millions of people can be exposed to radiation that can harm them and weapons powered by nuclear can create a horrifying massacre. risking humanity for such thing is just not worth enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20317460317 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6935642717 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1245421215 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18730756146 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077632722364 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656592798326 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132476786347 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833754336364 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.