Looking at the development of the society and generations, the mind set of an individual has changed as one would thrive to be wealthy than being knowledgeable. The word "successful" means reaching a point where the individual thinks that he is having enough resources and comforts he wanted to achieve in a certain period of time. It completely depends on ones thinking if he is successful enough. Some people believe that money can't buy you happiness where as some people think money is happiness.
In the current world of course we want individuals who contribute to the society with the knowledge and research they have gained, though sometimes it does not fetch you enough money but, this gives a complete different satisfaction which they would call it as success.
Most of the people these days judge a person based on his net worth and income for which they can call it as successful but, of course the person has his pockets filled because of the knowledge and the ability he has to earn money. This ability is the talent the person has and this must be transferred and taught to other individuals and that is when the society would recognize the person as successful. Undoubtedly we need money to live in this world but along with that we also need to contribute to the society with our knowledge and power, in my opinion that is considered as success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...forts he wanted to achieve in a certain period of time. It completely depends on ones thinking...
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Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... enough. Some people believe that money cant buy you happiness where as some people ...
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Line 1, column 464, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...lieve that money cant buy you happiness where as some people think money is happiness. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83536248442 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8706363939 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26260694914 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104751111074 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402698432011 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168953124148 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00262639516007 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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