People had conflicting viewpoints about what to do when they must face bad situations in life. This essay is going to analyze the reasons behind these 2 views before showing why I highly favor the latter.
Accepting bad situations is the only possible thing to do in certain cases. Sometimes, if we do not accept those bad situations as experiences. we can not broaden our mind in order to avoid facing with such problems again and again. To take one example, Nguyen Ngoc Ky - one of the greatest teachers in Viet Nam, he accepted the fact that he had lost both of his hands and succeeded in being a teacher by using two legs for writing, moving and many other daily activities.
Despite accepting bad situations is a reasonable choice, trying harder and improve in such problems is a more stable approach. In our lives, bad situations are indispensable but we need to try our best getting out of those. If we do not give it a try, we will not realize our abilities and what to do to prevent being in such situations again. For example, Thomas Edison's mother had strong belief in her son so that she could taught him in a good way to make him become one of the greatest physicists ever with many inventions which changed the face of the human-being. The other reason for this is that in some situations, only by trying and self-improving enough can we overcome bad situations. As a result, only in such situations can we know our good qualities which have never been found before.
In conclusion, while accepting bad situations is quite reasonable, I still agree to those who think that we need to try and improve in such situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions is quite reasonable, I still agree to those who think that we need to try a...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ree to those who think that we need to try and improve in such situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60273972603 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65023163289 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7900889554 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282365021609 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114945799234 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695624821412 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176624126517 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532051539803 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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