Some people believe that when a person deprive of something such as, flexible job, money, and peaceful life, he or she must consider it best for his or herself, however, many people also have a belief that, a person who deprive of essential needs of life must try hard to make his or her life comfortable. I agree to some extent, a person must try his best to achieve success in life, but he also have to accept its current condition to remain consistent in his life.
A person who accept his present condition in which he is unsatisfactory, help him to overcome his problems. For instance, due to this acceptance he will be able to maintain his mental health and can avoid mental issues such as, anxiety, depression and overwhelming. Moreover, if a person can't able to accept this reality of life, his stability starts reducing. Eventually, he can't able to face his daily life problems, as a result, he have to face more problems in his life and become uncomfortable, consequently, he will lost his peace of mind.
Working hard is an essential need of our daily life, everyone who have problems in his life such as, insufficiency of budget for a business and having not good academic records, he has to burn midnight oil for finding a solution to his problems. Moreover, a person who try his best to achieve his target, get confidence and satisfaction in form of appreciation from society. Furthermore, when a person achieve something by working hard, he become inspiration of youngsters and source of motivation for many others, hard working people always have a positive impact on a society.
In conclusion, it seems to me that accepting a miserable condition of life is not wrong but started living in this condition, and not trying for improvement is disgusting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...to achieve success in life, but he also have to accept its current condition to rema...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and overwhelming. Moreover, if a person cant able to accept this reality of life, hi...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ability starts reducing. Eventually, he cant able to face his daily life problems, a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...ability starts reducing. Eventually, he cant able to face his daily life problems, a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...is daily life problems, as a result, he have to face more problems in his life and b...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...me uncomfortable, consequently, he will lost his peace of mind. Working hard is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80718954248 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85746708064 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4917349726 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.1 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989822020032 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506481598089 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391005933334 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074543863358 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391298390134 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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