Today everybody dealing with their problems in different ways few people in favour of accepting the negative circumstances while other advocating to find best ways to solve the cause of problem. In this essay I will explain both the views, while in my opinion the proactive attitude towards the problem is best.
Firstly, people who accepting the situation are giving a positive feedback to their brain so that they can tackle it easily when it becomes out of hands, for instance if a person working in company and due to any situation, it becomes bankrupt then he will already decide that he will lose the job and, in this situation, although he is not in safe side but he is not under pressure.
Secondly, proactive attitude people they always enthusiastic for finding the solution and that’s leads them to eustress, and motivate them to find the solution. For example, many IELTS students preparing for exam but some left in between, few having low score in their 3rd and 4th attempt and they left but who keep on trying continuously they get the golden score too.
In summary, there are merits and demerits of both the approach however, before quite we have to work hard for solution and I totally towards proactive way of solving a problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
...circumstances while other advocating to find best ways to solve the cause of problem. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81018518519 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49347141378 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0748674298 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.166666667 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.1666666667 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105316720996 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489581805769 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258109181008 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562145126371 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308777874651 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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