Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
At some special periods, people may have lots of pressure, misfortune, failure, dissatisfaction or money insufficience, which make thêm lose hope and enthusiasm for their life. Someone believe that during that time, all we should do to overcome those terrible things is accepting them. Meanwhile, others strongly trust that it is better to try our best to find suitable solutions to improve such unexpected circumstances.
On the one hand, accepting is prerequisite when we have to suffer dreadful situations. Not everything we do makes us satisfied and fulfilled. “Failures are just installment towards victory”, so if we can learn how to accept and maintain our optimistic attitudes, all the worst things will soon pass. Instead of complaining and thinking pessimistically about our jobs or lives which make us lose enthusiasm and passion, try calming down, be cool-headed. Accepting is an invaluable tool to help individuals cope with failures and surmount dissatisfaction in everyone’s own life.
On the other hand, making efforts to find appropriate solutions is as well effective in improving our catastrophes. No magics will happen if we don’t try our best. Having fixed resolutions to deal with difficulties brings people fulfillment and lots of benefits such as enhacing our problem-solving skills. In this way, individuals can be given more determination and courageousness to explore, create new things as well as don’t feel nervous or overwrought when facing challenges. Taking Vietnam as an example, during Covid-19 pandemic, goverments, doctors, volunteers and its citizens have tried their best to control and overcome this disease, which help to minimize deaths as much as possible.
In conclusion, accepting difficulties and dissatisfaction is a greatly operational way to maintain humans’ happy life. Nevertheless, this factor is not sufficient to achieve success thus we had better combine it with making efforts and finding proper solutions in order to create more opportunities for ourselves to fulfil our dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... and enthusiasm for their life. Someone believe that during that time, all we should do...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... and enthusiasm for their life. Someone believe that during that time, all we should do...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56549520767 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28122637576 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3524100284 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.133333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17562352333 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572338808739 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526699425726 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109416462131 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677706044534 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.