Every individual has their own perspective of levels about their current situations. Some people believe that it is best to accept difficult circumstances while others advocate attempts to work hard and overcome such situations. In this essay, both views will be thoroughly discussed.
On the one hand, people tend to find satisfaction in their bad situations, it can be financial crises or an unsatisfactory profession. In fact this is mainly because such individuals do not have any other option but to survive in these conditions. For instance, most of the university students get bullied at work. Nevertheless, these people accept it just for the sake of making money in this world.
On the other hand, working hard to overpower these situations can help in professional career as well as to lead in successful life. In fact, there are many examples set by the people who had overcome these circumstances in life.
It is vividly seen that which option you choose will determine your future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92133630893 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0578732876 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194185499989 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066907418469 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638156406827 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996677532406 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554604455692 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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