Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The paragraph here indicates, few people believe that accepting a difficult situation would be better like unsatisfied job or money shortage while others debate that it will be good if individual try and alter such situations. An person with low self esteem and lack of fighting potential would be of the opinion that living on with what he does is fine. Whereas, auxiliary beings with confidence and wise knowledge prefer to make an effort for enhance the situation.
Human's always have multiple options to select like which decision they need to make for their journey. However an being who choose to be brave and wise would fight for betterment of that circumstances whereas, character with no intention for improving their life live in the same condition. For example " A person who make an attempt to upgrade his score would live a good life style than other individual who does not ". There is saying that " try and try until you succeed " which makes an impression that facing an issue with all you got would result in superior future.
The research conducted by " BBC " reveals that every successful individuals like Mark Zuckerberg and Bill gates did not received their victory in the first try but they tried to improved and corrected the mistakes made by them which lead to their unanimous triumph. Whereas, a number of people who compromised and accepted their state remained similar or got down to worst but in some scenario it concluded that being same would also result in good condition with luck.
In conclusion, I state that irrespective of what a figure does the outcome of it would be probability of both fine and worst. But, making an attempt to enhance the situation answered great achievements. I suggest people to give a try for betterment of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...bate that it will be good if individual try and alter such situations. An person with l...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...dividual try and alter such situations. An person with low self esteem and lack of...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...on they need to make for their journey. However an being who choose to be brave and wis...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...need to make for their journey. However an being who choose to be brave and wise w...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...not '. There is saying that ' try and try until you succeed ' which make...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'receive'
Suggestion: receive
... Mark Zuckerberg and Bill gates did not received their victory in the first try but they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92182410423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5547927124 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7419404805 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179385306383 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729515652448 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709961518423 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122326470842 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547086570923 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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