Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Facing bad living conditions such as low budgets or inadequate works, are commonly seen in a majority of the global citizen’s lives, and how to overcome such an issue has been a controversial topic among them for a long decade. While some ideas claim the ideal solution is the sustainment, others prefer striving for better life even if there are numerous failings. I would say that I fully agree with the latter statement.
Although bearing with poor state of living has some agreements, it might bring various negative impacts to one’s life. One of the outstanding consequences for the mentioned action is potential mental diseases could occur due to the stresses or pessimistic views of existence. Take the low salary as an example, such an issue can give someone the feeling of worry. And if that emotion is being kept for ages, that person will not have the motivation to overcome and lead to depression, which is a commonly mental trauma illness nowadays. About another impact for this problem, unsatisfactory works for instance, could drive a person losing interests with the occupation, end up leaving. This is a testament to why people should not feel fully satisfied with low living conditions.
Because of that, the most effective way to deal with a bad living situation is to improve it with the best effort. Every individual should seize their own opportunities to get over negative circumstances, and being optimistic to the future. Chances are not limited, it is better to give numerous attempts, even if there might be failure. For example, various inventions such as light bulb, which had many unsuccessful try, eventually became a revolution in the human history.
In conclusion, I believe instead of sustaining, people should develop the negative condition of living to benefit not only their own life, but also their nation economy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09150326797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77898474355 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4839531307 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164374753181 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504499039333 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429451846677 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941581716741 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376945000913 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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