A group of people think that to deal with bad times like unsatisfactory job or low income is to accept the situation. On the other hand, another group of people like to work hard so that they can come out of such situations. Although it is essential to accept the situation we are living in, it is important to always try to improve our condition.
Some people like to complain about their hard situation and blame it to their fate and accept it. Sometimes, we humans have no control over the situation we are in. For instance, during the current pandemic created by the coronavirus, we are unable to take some action despite our poor financial status. We are accepting the economic downturn and sticking to whatever job we have despite the lack of personal interest or low pay rate. The ability to accept and adapt to a hard situation is the basis to survive through this time.
Conversely, some people believe in trying despite how bad the situation is. For those people, complaining and blaming on the situation is not accepted. They believe that their actions can bring a positive change in their life so, they are always looking for opportunities to rise even in drastic conditions. For examples, various businesses are choosing online medium over the retail shop to reach their customers in the middle of this health crisis. If the business had accepted the situation and just waited for the virus to go away, then they would have faced a lot more loss in their business.
In my opinion, we should never give up and try our best to uplift our status. There is no reason in sticking in a job that you don't like or that pays much less that you deserve. Even though it is important to understand and accept the situation you are in, it is our duty to take some actions to bring ourselves out of such situations. Panicking and getting hopeless is never going to help you in tough times. It is hard work, which will lift you from the rubble. Thus, we should always try our best to improve bad situations for a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, look, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57417582418 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45621450105 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508241758242 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6879697018 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6315789474 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272843374237 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885501541454 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738332854972 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169683149197 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379025968567 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.