In life, many situations happen including those unwanted ones. When facing them, some people opine that it is best to accept them, while others believe that struggling to change the situation is better. I completely agree with both views and will explain the reasons why.
On the one side, some people opine that the best way to deal with difficult circumstances is by accepting it. This way is suitable for difficult circumstances that are unavoidable, and hard to be changed. By accepting them, people will learn to appreciate what they have, thus leading to them being thankful with what they have, although it may be different from what they expect. For instance, an employee named Billy gets a reduction in his wage, while other employees are getting laid off, due to the recession that affect the stability of his company. This situation is unwanted, but hard to change, because it is not because of his performance, but because of the economic condition in the country. Thus, the best way to face this is by accepting it, because Billy still gets a job amid this economic condition.
On the other side, other people believe that the best way to face difficult circumstances is by struggling to make the situation better. This solution is suitable for situations that are changeable. By striving, the situation will change into a better situation, because there will be no effort that will create no result. For example, James is being dissatisfied with his current working position as a salesperson. He wishes to be promoted to a supervision, thus he struggles every day to improve his skills. Finally, he succeeds to get out from the unwanted situation and to be in his dreamed situation, working as a supervisor.
In conclusion, both accepting and striving to change the situation are great ways to face difficult circumstances. Accepting the situation is good for difficult situations that are impossible to change, while struggling to change the situation is acceptable for unwanted circumstances that are still changeable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86773829045 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455357142857 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3438278599 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222981915166 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841626401013 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731810533031 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170721714883 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575526551532 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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