Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Different people around the world are facing a great challenge of tackling with bad situations. Some people opine that it is in our best interest to accept the worst situation, for example lack of money or undesirable job, while others argue that people should try to improve the situation. This essay will discuss that why it is necessary to improve the unpleasant situation instead of sitting idle.
On the one hand, some people encounters with challenges and they accept it to go on in life. They believe on the fate and thinks that nothing can be done to improve the situation due which they finally accepts what is going on in their lives. For instance, in US, 50% of the researches are abandoned in the middle after the occurrence of challenges in between. As a result, people accept the worst and blame their fate for its occurrence.
On the other hand, people should spend lots of effort on improving the situation. There is a saying “If there is a will there is a way”, so if someone do commitment to tackle with the terrible situation then the doors will open for them. Nothing is impossible as long as the person has courage and commitment that can enforce the person to continue their efforts. For example, Robert Bruce, the king of Scotland was defeated several times by king of England but he didn’t lose hope and by trying again and again finally succeeded to take over his kingdom. Hence, with struggle, commitment and hope any situation can be improved.
In conclusion, life is the journey of hurdles and challenges. This essay discussed that why trying to improve the situation is more desirable than not trying at all. In my opinion, despite the years of disappointments and struggle, one should not lose hope and continue their effort to improve the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'accept'
Suggestion: accept
...ve the situation due which they finally accepts what is going on in their lives. For in...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...s a will there is a way”, so if someone do commitment to tackle with the terrible ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81877022654 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57328973261 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.492742834 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232918282194 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073567259053 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636448099658 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149343974628 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692209770668 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.