Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views on how to deal with difficulties in life. While some argue with the idea of living with this, I believe that putting effort into improving such tough situations is what we better do.
There are two main reasons why people believe that accepting a bad thing, such as a shortage of money or unsatisfactory job, is the best way. Firstly, a realistic society has a variety of things which are beyond the control of a human. These include nationality, living environment, family circumstances or educational condition. For example, workers in developing countries could not receive a standard wage or working conditions like those people who work in developed nations. Therefore, they have to accept the lower-income to survive. Secondly, strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, and threats are the main factors that play an important role in the success of human. Depending on abilities or circumstances, people understand that there are things which they could not change or have such power to deal with.
However, I believe that people should try to improve their best to overcome such situations. The first reason is that the process of challenging difficulties has brought much more valuable lessons which boost individuals stronger, more patient and braver. From that, people would have opportunities to experience and find the best solution to meet their goals. Another thing is that people would not know their limit until they put themselves into it. As a result, the more effort people spend on something, the more worth result they receive.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why people accept to live with such tough situations, but in my opinion, people better try themselves best to gain them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, another thing, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22142857143 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8303655926 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.227662376 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303664183245 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960333684428 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11567572666 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187059829962 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468450396885 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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