Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that all of us face obstacles in their lives in their lives. However, it is crucial for everyone to know how to deal with these obstacles properly. While some people think that accepting problems is the best way to deal with them, I believe that trying to enhance the situation is inevitable.
On the one hand, many people tend to accept their problems as they are, without trying to change anything about them. They are always afraid of the consequences of any change. For example, even though a lot of people suffer from working in toxic environments, as some of them hate their careers, and others are paid low salaries, many of them do not think about quitting their jobs. They are always afraid to lose their current positions, and claim that if they left their jobs, they might not be able to have other job opportunities, and thus they would not be able to make ends meet.
On the other hand, in my opinion, everyone should try to put an end to his sufferings instead of compromising his life by accepting such unbearable situations. For instance, those who suffer from poverty due to bad economic circumstances in their countries may find more job opportunities, and thus a better life in another country. Alternatively, if a person did not try to think out of the box to find solutions for his problems, he would spend his whole life struggling with the same problem, and as a result, he might be able to achieve none of his dreams.
In conclusion, although many people try to stabilize their lives by being negative towards their problems, I am convinced that this can deteriorate their whole lives. Instead, they should do their best to tackle these problems in a way that permits them to live in dignity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70261437908 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62153636304 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5818805927 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14274488107 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581518383809 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056845188216 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877913895366 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283419105723 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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