Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Never give up. There is an ever increasing role of stress in human live closely associated with bad situations as dissatisfied workplace or a money scarcity. Despite the fact that some people believe that their humility helps them to cope with depressing experience, I consider that efforts directed to change situations have more useful effects.
The most significant of reason to accept unpleasant situations is less stress. For example, people can bear a low salary or a hatred job because they have made it a routine the ride. They are disable to afford advanced needs but continue to work for a penny-ante salary. As a result, they are convinced in their inability to reach something better, so they get stuck in willingness to act. Moreover, they can suffer from it their whole life, even though they realise that it is possible to take up the running themselves.
The same cannot be said for people who do all possible not to lose. Although they witness more stress or their chances of mischief can be doubled, such individuals improve the situations to suit themselves. For instance, in their unpleasant work they find something interesting to work hard, the show their powerful features or unique qualifications. Consequently, the get new prospectives on their job like your positions or job replacement which instantly changes their income and unpleasant situations they have had before.
To conclude, while people, who believed in their ability to never give up, receive beneficial results after situation changed, the other ones prolong their poor mood and miserable life in poor conditions. I hope that the only thing which helps people to stay winners in bad experience is their activity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disabled'.
Suggestion: disabled
...ve made it a routine the ride. They are disable to afford advanced needs but continue t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12186379928 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78087236572 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1611261723 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111769411915 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409498764984 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256658049102 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718350596784 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241927914061 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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